Your goal
Compare two versions of one event notice and report what changed, was added, removed or retained.
The posting date is when the notice was issued; the event date is when people meet. Distinguish them and compare matching fields.
Before you start
- 판본
- a version of a document
- 게시일
- the date a notice was posted
- 추가
- adding a new item
- 제외
- removing from a list or requirement
- 그대로
- unchanged
Explore the situation
Fictional notice · read the source
Hanbit reading group · versions
The meeting is on November 10.
| Field | Earlier notice · 10월 30일 | Revised notice · 11월 1일 |
|---|---|---|
| 행사 시각 | 11월 10일 오후 2시 | 11월 10일 오후 3시 |
| 장소 | 1층 교실 | 2층 자료실 |
| 준비물 | 공책·사진 | 공책·펜. 사진은 제출하지 않아도 됩니다. |
| 신청 마감 | 11월 5일 오후 5시 | 변경 없음: 11월 5일 오후 5시 |
This is a complete update of the same event; conditions marked unchanged remain in force.
Learn the expressions
First verify that both texts refer to the same event. Compare time, place, materials and deadlines field by field. Do not use the new posting date as the event date.
| Information to locate | Korean expression |
|---|---|
| 변경 | 시작 시각이 오전 열 시에서 열한 시로 바뀌었어요. |
| 추가 | 준비물에 펜이 추가됐어요. |
| 제외 | 사진은 제출하지 않아도 돼요. |
| 유지 | 신청 마감은 그대로예요. |
Here removing the photo requirement means it is no longer required, not that photos are forbidden. Mere omission from a short message does not prove that a requirement was removed.
Read the conversation
Model: confirm the same event
새 안내는 다른 모임이에요?
Show meaning
Is the new notice about another meeting?
같은 모임인데 시간과 장소가 바뀌었어요.
Show meaning
It is the same meeting, but the time and place changed.
Model: changes to materials
사진도 내야 해요?
Show meaning
Do I still have to submit a photo?
사진은 제외됐고 펜이 추가됐어요. 공책은 그대로예요.
Show meaning
Photos were removed, pens added, and notebooks retained.
Build a sentence
Change the card details and try a sentence before revealing the example. Then assemble the sentence pieces.
Compare the notice conditions
Same event, revised notice
Before
- Posted
- 10월 30일
- Meeting
- 11월 10일 오후 2시 · 1층 교실
- Materials
- 공책·사진
Example and explanation
기존 안내는 오후 두 시에 1층 교실에서 모인다고 했어요.
This is the old version.
After
- Posted
- 11월 1일
- Meeting
- 11월 10일 오후 3시 · 2층 자료실
- Materials
- 공책·펜
Example and explanation
시간과 장소가 바뀌었고 펜이 추가됐어요.
Also note the photo exemption and retained notebook.
Sentence-piece practice
1. Report a start-time change from ten to eleven.
Sentence pieces
- 오전 열 시에서
- 바뀌었어요.
- 시작 시각이
- 열한 시로
2. State that notebooks remain and pens are added.
Sentence pieces
- 펜이
- 공책은 그대로이고
- 추가됐어요.
Practice
Choose a response that fits the situation using the expressions you learned.
1. Which distinguishes posting and event dates?
- The event starts on the new posting date
- They are always identical
- Posting is when the text was issued; event is when people meet
2. Old materials are notebook/photo; revised materials notebook/pen. What is added?
- 사진
- 펜
- 공책
3. Which correctly reports that photos need not be submitted?
- 사진 제출 의무가 없어졌어요.
- 사진을 가져오면 안 돼요.
- 신청 자체가 취소됐어요.
4. A short message omits the fee. What follows?
- 무료로 바뀐 것이 확실해요.
- 기존 금액의 두 배예요.
- 전체 안내나 담당자에게 확인해요.
Try a new situation
Fictional notice · read the source
Saebom writing class · two versions
Both notices describe the same November 12 class.
| Field | Earlier notice · 11월 2일 | Revised notice · 11월 4일 |
|---|---|---|
| 행사일 | 11월 12일 | 변경 없음: 11월 12일 |
| 시작 시각 | 오전 10시 | 오전 11시 |
| 장소 | 1층 한빛실 | 2층 새봄실 |
| 준비물 | 공책·사진 제출 | 공책·펜. 사진은 제외되어 제출하지 않아도 됩니다. |
| 참가비 | 5,000원 | 변경 없음: 5,000원 |
| 신청 마감 | 11월 8일 오후 5시 | 변경 없음: 11월 8일 오후 5시 |
This is a complete update of the same event; conditions marked unchanged remain in force.
Use the new role information. Write the required details in Korean and try saying them.
Tasks
Try the tasks first, then compare with the answers and examples in step 10.
1. Report the old and new start times.
Show a hint
Use the pattern and keep the supplied information.
2. Give the revised floor and room.
Show a hint
Use the pattern and keep the supplied information.
3. State the newly required material.
Show a hint
Use the pattern and keep the supplied information.
4. Report the current photo and notebook requirements together.
Show a hint
Use the pattern and keep the supplied information.
5. Confirm the retained deadline with date and time.
Show a hint
Use the pattern and keep the supplied information.
Distinguish changes, additions, removals and unchanged items
Compare the same fields in the November 2 and November 4 notices.
시작: 오전 10시 → 오전 11시
- Changed
- Added
- Removed
- Unchanged
장소: 1층 한빛실 → 2층 새봄실
- Changed
- Added
- Removed
- Unchanged
펜을 준비물에 넣음
- Changed
- Added
- Removed
- Unchanged
사진 제출 의무를 없앰
- Changed
- Added
- Removed
- Unchanged
공책은 계속 필요함
- Changed
- Added
- Removed
- Unchanged
마감: 11월 8일 오후 5시
- Changed
- Added
- Removed
- Unchanged
Check your learning
Read the new conditions and distinguish the key information.
1. In the transfer notice, when does the November 12 class start?
- 11월 4일 오전 열한 시
- 오전 열한 시
- 오전 열 시
2. What is the revised venue?
- 2층 새봄실
- 1층 한빛실
- 2층 한빛실
3. What happened to the application deadline?
- 11월 4일로 당겨졌어요.
- 마감이 없어졌어요.
- 11월 8일 오후 5시로 그대로예요.
4. Which change label matches?
- Venue — unchanged
- Pen — added
- Notebook — removed
5. What is the fee after revision?
- 5,000원
- 무료
- 10,000원
6. Which accurately reports changes?
- 행사 날짜와 참가비가 모두 바뀌었어요.
- 모든 준비물이 없어졌어요.
- 시간과 장소가 바뀌었고 펜이 추가됐어요.
Reflect on your reading
Tick only what you actually checked. Feedback from another person is optional and is not required to finish the lesson.
Answers and explanations
Show answers and explanations
Practice questions
1. Which distinguishes posting and event dates?
Answer: Posting is when the text was issued; event is when people meet
Read each date’s role.
- The event starts on the new posting date — Issuing and starting differ.
- They are always identical — They can differ.
2. Old materials are notebook/photo; revised materials notebook/pen. What is added?
Answer: 펜
The pen is newly required.
- 사진 — The photo requirement is removed.
- 공책 — The notebook is retained.
3. Which correctly reports that photos need not be submitted?
Answer: 사진 제출 의무가 없어졌어요.
Distinguish not required from forbidden.
- 사진을 가져오면 안 돼요. — Do not turn it into a ban.
- 신청 자체가 취소됐어요. — Applications are not cancelled.
4. A short message omits the fee. What follows?
Answer: 전체 안내나 담당자에게 확인해요.
Omission alone does not confirm a change.
- 무료로 바뀐 것이 확실해요. — No free-price change is established.
- 기존 금액의 두 배예요. — That invents an amount.
Learning check
1. In the transfer notice, when does the November 12 class start?
Answer: 오전 열한 시
The revised start is eleven.
- 11월 4일 오전 열한 시 — You substituted the posting date.
- 오전 열 시 — That is the old time.
2. What is the revised venue?
Answer: 2층 새봄실
Both floor and room changed.
- 1층 한빛실 — That is the old venue.
- 2층 한빛실 — You mixed the new floor and old room.
3. What happened to the application deadline?
Answer: 11월 8일 오후 5시로 그대로예요.
Both notices give the same deadline.
- 11월 4일로 당겨졌어요. — Revision posting is not the deadline.
- 마감이 없어졌어요. — The deadline is explicitly retained.
4. Which change label matches?
Answer: Pen — added
The pen is new.
- Venue — unchanged — The venue changed.
- Notebook — removed — Notebook is retained.
5. What is the fee after revision?
Answer: 5,000원
Both versions state 5,000 won.
- 무료 — No free-price revision exists.
- 10,000원 — Do not double it.
6. Which accurately reports changes?
Answer: 시간과 장소가 바뀌었고 펜이 추가됐어요.
Report the changed and added fields.
- 행사 날짜와 참가비가 모두 바뀌었어요. — Date and fee were retained.
- 모든 준비물이 없어졌어요. — Notebook and pen remain required.
Example answers
Written responses are examples. Other wording can also meet the same conditions.
1. Report the old and new start times.
시작 시각이 오전 열 시에서 열한 시로 바뀌었어요.
시작 시각이 오전 10시에서 11시로 바뀌었어요.
The event date is unchanged.
2. Give the revised floor and room.
장소가 2층 새봄실로 바뀌었어요.
2층 새봄실에서 모여요.
Do not mix it with the old venue.
3. State the newly required material.
펜이 추가됐어요.
준비물에 펜이 추가됐어요.
Include the pen in the new list.
4. Report the current photo and notebook requirements together.
사진은 내지 않아도 되고 공책은 가져와야 해요.
사진은 제외됐고 공책은 그대로예요.
Separate photo exemption from retained notebook.
5. Confirm the retained deadline with date and time.
신청 마감은 11월 8일 오후 다섯 시로 그대로예요.
11월 8일 오후 5시까지 신청해야 해요.
Do not read the posting date as a deadline.
Distinguish changes, additions, removals and unchanged items
Fictional notice · read the source
Saebom writing class · two versions
Both notices describe the same November 12 class.
| Field | Earlier notice · 11월 2일 | Revised notice · 11월 4일 |
|---|---|---|
| 행사일 | 11월 12일 | 변경 없음: 11월 12일 |
| 시작 시각 | 오전 10시 | 오전 11시 |
| 장소 | 1층 한빛실 | 2층 새봄실 |
| 준비물 | 공책·사진 제출 | 공책·펜. 사진은 제외되어 제출하지 않아도 됩니다. |
| 참가비 | 5,000원 | 변경 없음: 5,000원 |
| 신청 마감 | 11월 8일 오후 5시 | 변경 없음: 11월 8일 오후 5시 |
This is a complete update of the same event; conditions marked unchanged remain in force.
시작: 오전 10시 → 오전 11시 → Changed
The old time is replaced by the new one.
장소: 1층 한빛실 → 2층 새봄실 → Changed
Floor and room changed.
펜을 준비물에 넣음 → Added
This is a new required item.
사진 제출 의무를 없앰 → Removed
The revision explicitly says it is no longer required.
공책은 계속 필요함 → Unchanged
Both versions require it.
마감: 11월 8일 오후 5시 → Unchanged
The deadline is unchanged.
Sentence-piece practice
1. Report a start-time change from ten to eleven.
시작 시각이 오전 열 시에서 열한 시로 바뀌었어요.
Give old and new times in order.
2. State that notebooks remain and pens are added.
공책은 그대로이고 펜이 추가됐어요.
Retaining and adding are different changes.
Review and continue
Come back to these
Recall with the example closed
Compare two versions of one event notice and report what changed, was added, removed or retained.
Change one detail
Change a person, action or time and make two sentences.
Combine with earlier expressions
Make a short exchange with a question and response.
Review what felt difficult
Review this expressionCompare two versions of a notice →Earlier learningReconnect the foundation →Look separately at activity completion and core learning results.